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Broccoli's the bomb say up jump the veggie

21st Sep 2012, 11:56 AM
Broccoli's the bomb say up jump the veggie
Average Rating: 5 (2 votes)
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creamygnome 21st Sep 2012, 11:56 AM edit delete
creamygnome
I'm just going to eat croutons until the break of dawn.
creamygnome 22nd Sep 2012, 7:20 PM edit delete
creamygnome
Draginbeard -

Walking past Fritos is SO HARD.

Thanks for enjoying! This one was actually pretty hard. I'm not a natural rapper so it took awhile to pick words, add/subtract words to get the correct flow, and then find rhymes on top of that!

I often worry because a lot of my humor relies on my manner of speech. If you haven't experienced my idiolect then some of the joke might be lost. It's kind of like stand-up comedy. If you just READ Hedberg's or Seinfeld's jokes, they aren't as funny compared to if you HEAR them tell those same jokes. It's all just a tricky process. Sometimes I think I should do audio versions of some of my comics. Especially the rap ones! There's no beat to hear so each person is going to have a different flow in their imagination when they read it. Then again, that always leaves the possibility that they'll imagine it funnier than I would perform it!
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LooeyQ 21st Sep 2012, 12:52 PM edit edit delete reply
LooeyQ
That last panel is some very good advice!
creamygnome 22nd Sep 2012, 7:07 PM edit edit delete reply
creamygnome
The only thing to care about is running out of vinaigrette!
Draginbeard 22nd Sep 2012, 7:29 AM edit edit delete reply
Draginbeard
UNGH! UNGH! yeah yeah! I went to store to buy me a snack, the man behind the counter started giving me flak. He say put the bag down yo. You be wanting healthy to go! Veggies beat down your woes, just walk past them Fritos!

Im loving these veggies strips! Great job!!!!
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